All Comments on 'In Submission to... Ch. 01'

by MzSapphiria

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bredrebredrealmost 13 years ago
Great Job

I am a visual person reader, your writing and story is pulling me into your world. Great job, please update soon

NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 13 years ago

I like this start. please continue, u must know that this chapter was too short.

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 13 years ago
Tease

Omg what a tease, way too darn short!!!

I want more and like now please. Mumbling about evil writers that leave us hanging lol.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
WOW

I WANT THE NAME OF THAT SPA!!! Come you know that chapter was two short!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
"She was a big woman BUT she was beautiful"???

Really? 'cause one can't be big AND beautiful; one can only big and ugly? SMH...

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