All Comments on 'In Sync'

That was a a really interesting story. A very good first post. I would love to read more of your stories. Thanks.

I loved the concept and enjoyed reading the story. Something that can stand alone or could be developed further as more than just an erotic tale. Spelling and grammar are good as well unlike so many other stories on here that are frustrating due to the poor quality of written language.

Looking forward to your next submission.