All Comments on 'In the Arms of Fenris'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome

Fantastic story. Very real characters, and it's nice to see a story that doesn't follow the standard Dr. Seuss "He fucked, she fucked, they fucked, we fucked." Thank you for an enjoyable read

I_M_PatientI_M_Patientover 14 years ago
Excellent work as usual

I think this is one of your best published to date. I think you may need to make this a series, as the characters are well defined and under utilized in the story.

catman71catman71over 14 years ago
intersting

well worth the read and so diiferant from the stories uaualy seen here involving packs and such, vickys thing with the cake begs expounding upon

pouncingtigresspouncingtigressover 14 years ago
excellent!

Wonderful story. Great characterization, right down to the secondaries (and now we're all curious about the Henrys!) Excellent work that shows non-human/paranormal stories don't always need high drama and action to be totally enthralling. Maybe we'll see more of Graydon's siblings? (hint hint) Keep up the good work!

lildragonlildragonover 14 years ago
Perfect

Wow I really loved this story. It was funny and sexy. Hope to see more of your talent soon.

ShalysiaJixShalysiaJixalmost 14 years ago
Awesome!

Well done! Please oh please write more!

wayseriwayserialmost 14 years ago

really glad i found this story, pls write more stories like thois one. very fresh, yet developed character..

donaldedonaldeover 13 years ago
great story

was a really good story very enjoyable and well writen looking foward to your next posting

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it

Loved your main characters and the others surronding them. Nice pace throughout the piece. Would love to see more of these two people. Thanks for sharing the story with us. :)

GimletEdgeGimletEdgealmost 13 years ago
Eminently satisfying!

This is one of my favorite "non human" stories ever. The casual, almost playful way werewolf-ism is treated in the tale is refreshing. And yet there's still an undercurrent of the dark and powerful.

My only regret is their lack of interest in offspring. It would have made a great "Return of Fenris" story.

Thanks for sharing it.

GE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Woman's Best Friend

What a delightful read. I really enjoyed this imaginative, well written and humorous story.

P.S.

I am a straight 60 year old male engineer living in Sugar Land, Texas

trubblemakurtrubblemakurover 11 years ago
3rd time around

Still a good read one of my favs

willieonewillieoneover 11 years ago
Ok you were right!

You said I'd enjoy this story and I must admit it is a wonderful tale!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Loved this story! Thank for the heads up, was a slow burn but really liked the characters! Cheers!

SciFurzSciFurzabout 8 years ago
Enjoyed this..

very much. A romantic tale where he just happens to be a werewolf and the convenience it brings to her daily life without the stereotypical clan war plots.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
good

it'a a good story. I liked it a lot. The only thing is I felt that moving in was way too soon. Five stars though.

TLB1981TLB1981almost 7 years ago

You should write a story about her meeting his family.

oldpantythiefoldpantythief9 months ago

One of the best I've read involving werewolves and love. I did question how he got out of his clothes the first night he changed while laying with Marty? Other than that I loved the story and think it is well written.

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