All Comments on 'In the Beginning'

by velvetouche

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Not sure if this has any real substance ..

Check out 'Isle of Woman', etc.. by Peirs Anthony.

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 9 years ago
This

is an interesting attempt at something few Lit authors have the courage to try. It isn't entirely successful, but kudos to the author for daring to write and post it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
different type of story !

I liked it..4 stars... would like more of this story...

thank you...

stlgoddessfreyastlgoddessfreyaalmost 9 years ago
Interesting Take On An Old Story

I liked the basic premise of this and the writer has a really fantastic vocabulary, which kept the long descriptions of sex from getting repetitive, Unfortunately, I think it works against the voice in the story, since the more scientific descriptions of body parts are out of place in this story of Eva's discovery of pleasure at the dawn of time.

JuicywormJuicywormalmost 9 years ago
Very interesting,

A new an interesting approache to an ancient story. Good reading, it worked for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
d/d gets an auto dump and a 1 star

FUCK YOU!!!

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