All Comments on 'In the Dark'

and i think the previous comments were way too harsh. i did not find the opening exchange overly confusing and i have read many stories that start with a comversation where the reader has to sort out who is who and what is happening. while there are stil a lot of unanswered questions about Tave, thought that the scene in the dark room was quite imaginative. she finally has a chance for Jesse to notice her and spend some time with him and he acts like a self-absorbed jerk. she figures out a way to cut through that without being a bitch about it. perhaps the story needs to be reworked to correct for typos and grammar (although i barely noticed) but i think that the concept was brilliant. will there be another chapter?

Where did the sex part go u fuckwit!!!

this is the first story that has made me want to comment on its quality. the story had me from the very beginning and did not disappoint in the least at the end. I was truly mesmerized by it usually I don't last for that long of a read but it was truly a pleasure to read I hope there is more. Thank you. radicalmo/ tj-ro@Hotmail.com

Sex is just sex ... here today gone tomorrow. But a feeling growing between 2 people ,,, now that is something else!