All Comments on 'In the Dark of Night'

Felt vaguely improbable at the outset, but with unmatched insight Ausfet unravels a really authentic, sweet tale with her usual sensuality - just great writing!

I really enjoyed this, including all the little details of their separate lives and Daz's new neighbours. Cracking story!

Just what we've come to expect. Touching, and some great one liners too.

as the center of the story. Good characters for the story.

While I'm with the sensible sister in thinking things through in terms of risks, I can easily see a male taking what was on offer, no matter how unusual.

Really nice build up. The hidden identity was a nice plot ploy. Cool read.

A sexy mystery from the queen of the unconventional. Once again Ausfet shows she’s one of the best. 5*

Sex with a mysterious stranger who comes in the dark of night? A hot premise and well-delivered, and well-combined with ethnic food and good whiskey, too. It's a perfect erotic storm with the prospects of HEA, too. You know they will be happy together. I expected her to be Simon's daughter; maybe she is. Imaginative storytelling. Thanks, Ausfet!

A very sweet story. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

You write the best characters, hands down. I just love your stories - there's so much life in them!

Good yarn. Loved the places you took this story. Some touching moments, and some great one liners too.

I loved it. Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing it. Keep up the good work. Now I have to look up your earlier work!

I'm working on a story for romance that has all of the elements this one does. Romantic indeed.

I go along with the other comments.

It’s good to have a ‘read’, because that’s what the site is about.

Goodness me! it’s even in the Section Heading:

Stories.

I wish there was a means of segregating the wham-bam from proper stories.......

If I had all that time back from part read texts.

...but I’ve been saving “In the Dark of Night” for a quiet afternoon so I could fully enjoy the story. Sweet and satisfying romance, overlaid with your uniquely earthy and visceral approach to sexuality. Once again, thank you for sharing your work.

Well done. People try and write "Strine", but rarely is it ever this right. And the relationship felt incredibly real, too.

Again, well done!

This was a fun read.

Damned good job!!

What an amazing story, brilliantly thought through, structured and written. Thank you Ausfet, you are a diamond

I wish I had the words, or the skill to use them, to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. Wow, just wow.

An interesting story line, delivered beautifully.

Thanks.

Zach

After years of reading Literotica, usually several stories a day, I've read most of the story lines, including some anonymous sex stories. But I do not remember one like this wherein the anonymous lady appears in the dead of night, requesting sex, while remaining incognito through several sessions.

The lead into it was brilliant.

The description of them fumbling forward was masterful.

The revealing was so clever, true to both characters and told so smoothly.

The follow-up was gripping.

A well-told, compelling romantic tale like no other.

Thank you.

Thank you.

Thank you.

Saying that reminds me that I found ausfet through a comment on another story, which recommended her as a female who wrote compelling stories. Unfortunately, I've forgotten that commenter and story, so cannot give credit, but am so glad I followed up on his lead.

A grateful reader,

Paul in Oklahoma

PS. I've also been impressed with other Aussie writers.

A tip of the hat to the writers from down under.

Great story! You are my favorite writer on this site! You are really talented.

I’ve read a lot on this site. surprisingly, this story has escaped me! Great job, it brings out the best in us. 5*

Best story I've read on here! hot, sexy and romantic all in one!