All Comments on 'In The Dragon's Keep Pt. 03'

by ErosinaScarlett

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cantfightfatecantfightfateover 7 years ago
I enjoy the story a lot

but the long gaps between are really frustrating and break the flow of the story. For each new chapter, I have to go back and reread to remember the details of the story. In the future, maybe wait until you have written the whole thing and post more frequently.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Saw that coming, but still very well done ;)

I've been hoping that these two come to some kind of compromise, guess I'll find out if that's how it plays out.

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