All Comments on 'In the Examination Room Ch. 02'
by TotalKnockout
- 20 Comments
Anonymousabout 10 years agoI love the series so far. I do have some similar questions as to where it is going? Paid for a healthy child...what if not healthy & once pregnant, assuming, what happens then? Maybe this is all planned out & you are just keeping us in suspense! I hope to read more:)
TotalKnockoutabout 10 years agoAuthorAnd thanks for your interest in this series! I'm not going to give anything away but I will say that there are a few major twists coming as Mary learns more and more about the doctors caring for her and the mysterious history of the Institute…
Thanks for reading and stay tunes for the next installment!
TKO
Anonymousabout 10 years agoI am enjoying this series and your imagination on the equipment, look forward to Mary's next twists..
Thank you for writing this series and your other stories.
Male USA 50+
Digdigrexalmost 10 years agoWonderful story and clearly well thought out in advance. The traumatic events in Mary's life provide an explanation for her susceptibility to being abused especially by an authoritative figure like a boss or a presumed dr. It will be Interesting to see how Totalknockout develops the secondary sub theme of the sexy assistant and whether Mary falls victim to another unsavory character and situation.
Please see private comments re accurate medical and physiologic responses to stimuli.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoi really like this story.
there are to few things in the world that i still like. but i really do like this story.
i have been a long time for the next chapters.
but i will wait forever if i must.
because i am patient.
Anonymousover 6 years agoPlease continue! Write more insemination/impregnation/breeding, medical play stories!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoFantastic!! Can't wait for more sessions w lots more sperm injected into her to ensure pregnancy and then continuous stimulation to orgasm daily using various methods throughout the pregnancy and feeding her a steady diet of sperm every day.
thomas_deanover 1 year agoMechanics of Insemination
Signed up for insemination, Tullah t/n Mary, once a runaway most recently a pole dancer, is undressed for examination before she is subjected to a stimulating encounter with the dildo - shaped "bull" in the insemination procedure. After a robust workout with the bull, Mary is gently carried to her bed by the doctor.
Considering the down and out caste of pole dancers from which the good doctors are selecting his birth mothers the rewards even with the inflation since the 2014 release of the story are too great. At these rates the doctors need not get rely on referrals from the shadowy world of the budda-bing clubs. Stock brokers, lawyers and doctors would be lining up to meet the bull.
Perhaps the professional pink collar class is not lining up to become surrogates. Most surrogates are however not that far beneath the professional elite. Most are said to be middle class women who take up the practise to finance rather modest goals, a fancy car, a nice vacation, home improvements, perhaps a new house.
I'd leave dollar amounts entirely. US money is depreciating so fast that in a very near future, these emoluments specified in EXAMINATION ROOM may soon prove inadequate.
A pity TOTAL never completed the tale. Still the concept is interesting.
Dr_James_Davies_DFover 1 year agoSelection of the gestational carrier
In assisted reproduction, fertility clinics claim to solicit the best and the brightest as sperm donors. Wouldn't their choice of the egg carrier be as careful?
Anonymous5 months agoOh man, left hanging by another good story that could have gone on longer with more sessions with the bull machine or even the Doctors for a more personal approach. ;)
Campus775 months agoSomehow I don't think we will ever see the completion of this story. Written in 2014 and no new stories since makes me sure that the author has no further interest in Lit. Too bad because this odd little tale has some potential to be a good one.
