All Comments on 'In the Kitchen with Kellie'

by mrhoodoo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I need to schedule a hair appointment with her!

Very nice....would love to have a haircut like that one!

mrhoodoomrhoodooover 17 years agoAuthor
you never know

lol! Thanks for the comment! Wish I could help, but she moved :( But, if your nice to your hairstylist/barber, you never know where it might lead :)

DonFoxDonFoxabout 17 years ago
Hot stuff!

Every guy that's ever been to SuperCuts or Sports Clips has had this kind of fantasy, so this tale hits a chord with me. I've also had my hair cut by a buddy's hot wife named Kelli, although all I got out of it was a bad haircut and a nagging hard-on! Still, this is a great little story and needs just a minor polish to make it perfect. Throw in a bit of verbal interplay before the sex begins and you get more well-rounded characters with a more natural chemistry. Otherwise, great stuff!

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