All Comments on 'In the Mango Orchard'

if i wanted to try and read foriegn names i would have gone to that area either use english names and words or use the proper area

I actually really liked this. Captured the virgin state of mind nicely. Also enjoyed the "flavor" of erotica from a different culture!

Ignore the person who doesn't like to read foreign words (he/she can't even spell 'foreign' correctly) no one is forcing anyone to read the stories.

It was a good build up, well written with good descriptive text. thank you, keep on writing.

Really great piece of writing.

Enjoyed it. U shud write more.

u r amazing..i am huffing and puffing right now

You didn't have to read it. There are many forms of English, and the US variant is in a minority. More people speak English in the Indian sub-continent than in all the rest of the world put together. I liked the story, though I speak Scots English.

Almost as sweet as Lyangra mangoes....

But the brother should have been a little more gentle.

This story was smokin hot.....Would you please write more stories of this kind?

Really hot. Please go ahead.

I thought your use of English appropriate and well-done. I enjoyed the perspective from a culture that's not mine.

It appears that some readers are letting racial tendencies color their mind. The only cure is to drop them alone into a large foreign city, with only a very little of the local money in their pocket. Their world views will change pretty fast...

A good quality story. I have enjoyed very much. Keep up the good work.

Babli..one of my frequent search words I google is literotica babli5, which leads me here to quench my thirst.. And this is one of my favour ties stories..

..come back and write a new story for us.. It's been long..dear..

keeep up goodc work

Amazingly written and loved the desi touches.

Keep up the good work