by TaraForFun
I liked your writing style and the flow of the story. There was enough descriptions to get a good mental picture and I won’t lie that my pussy was twitching by the end. Great work!
The penetration description was deliciously steamy... it's a small but important detail for some of us that often gets overlooked, so I thought it at least warranted some acknowledgement & gratitude.
I loved the detailed descriptions and epic visuals, the slow push in, and the second round for her unexpected pleasure. I've read and enjoyed a few of your stories so far. Thank you and please keep it up!
Nice. Entertaining and hot; and I like your straight-ahead writing style. Well done.