All Comments on 'In The Mountains'

by TaraForFun

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Jojodncr17Jojodncr17over 6 years ago
Very nice!

I liked your writing style and the flow of the story. There was enough descriptions to get a good mental picture and I won’t lie that my pussy was twitching by the end. Great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Thank you!

The penetration description was deliciously steamy... it's a small but important detail for some of us that often gets overlooked, so I thought it at least warranted some acknowledgement & gratitude.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Yum

I loved the detailed descriptions and epic visuals, the slow push in, and the second round for her unexpected pleasure. I've read and enjoyed a few of your stories so far. Thank you and please keep it up!

DowntownLA47DowntownLA47about 2 years ago

Nice. Entertaining and hot; and I like your straight-ahead writing style. Well done.

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I'm a woman who likes writing dirty stories. I've published these stories on Smashwords as Tara Shaw. If I'm in the chatroom, I'm usually sharing slutty pics so pm me and ask ;) I love reading the dirty comments. I'm just looking for fun. No meetups or longterm online commi...