All Comments on 'In the Rain'

pretty good, keep writing

Perhaps he should have quietly bought the painting before they recognized each other?

That would validate his taste, their deep affinity, and his support of her as an artist.

It helps a lot for a couple to have something to talk about between rounds of sex.

Other wise they might only fuck during rain storms.

i'd love to see what happens next with them, and ultimately they get together

I easily picutred the scene. How lucky was she to run into Clyde and have him experience the same feelings she did? Yes please continue the story, maybe they will end up together in the end. They both have artistic minds she an artist and he a photographer they would be very compatable. I LOVED your first story too about Renee and Anya - it was so hot! Please keep writing i think you are very talented and have little room for "honing," as your bio stated. Have you ever considered writing an erotica Novel? I for sure would anticipate it and read it. Thanks for sharing with us. I will read both your stories again and watch for any new ones.

Erotically turned on, Debb

You paint images well with your words - images of places and images of people in transition. If I had a suggestion to make it would be to consider creating a separate voice for your second character through your choice of grammar and vocab. This is no simple thing painting a person with a different brush, but I have feeling you will do it with ease. = SC =

You are a really good writer, one of my favorites. I see that you wrote these stories a few years ago. I think you should write some more. I will check to see. Thanks