All Comments on 'In the Shoe-Shop'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

You achieved just the right balance. Erotic with a touch of humour, but so believble. I definitely need new shoes ............

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
Delightful

I've just finished a shoe shop story, it will be posted tonight...

Such delicious wanton intimacy, and beautifully understated. Well done.

PantieswherePantieswhereover 12 years ago
Hahaha

Ahhh! Marvelous! Your diction had such style.! Such.. Unique witty style! XD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

What a delightful story. I read this on the Tube on the way into work and the image stayed in my mind for the rest of the day. Perhaps it's time I left my rather boring job in IT and moved into retail!

Pilot4029Pilot4029about 10 years ago
Outstanding!

Just wonderfully erotic. Five stars!

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Always searching. Now I'm back writing a lot as well. I want to thank everyone for some great feedback, and as promised, new chapters of all sorts of tales will appear very soon. I want to thank everyone who has taken the time to send me messages (mostly) of support, and I wan...