All Comments on 'In the Shower'

So beautifully written and so hot. Absolutely amazing.

The style blew my mind, you can feel the tension just by reading it... Keep it up, it's awesome

I know this; I see all the action hiding among your words. Taking a long hot shower while my wife's in Europe, missing her, pouring shampoo on the handle of the shower squeegee, fucking myself long and slowly . . .

This is really beautifully written - ‘the smudge of your nipples’ is a great image.

Thank you.