All Comments on 'In Which an Elven Servant... Ch. 14'

I’ve been reading for a while and I’m finally decideding to comment, I really like your writing style and so far it has been excellent, I hope you continue through to a satisfifying climax, pun intended.

Annoying! Redundant! And poorly written!

I think this series is very well written, aside from a few minor typos. If you find it annoying, stop reading it. The rest of us will continue to enjoy the author's wit & savor the sexual tension. Adults understand how to postpone gratification while children & others lacking maturity demand immediate satisfaction.

Because "dick in vagina, thrust vigorously" isn't? At the end of the day, porn is going to feel redundant if you don't have the right fetish - emotional impact aside. Go read something else. This is an excellent denial fic.

A lot of you in the comment section voicing frustrations sound just like Lucy and Lorelei being denied that ultimate pleasure. The author is just like Master, edging you and keeping you going while denying you of exactly what you want. Hahaha.

@anon 'It's sort of ironic' & nthusiastic

Well said...