All Comments on 'In Which an Elven Servant... Ch. 24'

Punishing a masochist always takes some creativity. Beautiful.

Maybe its because I am reading chapters back to back catching up but tricking the demon and punish her (and almost as often Lorilei) is getting repetitive. Losing interest.

It remains amazing to me how you've taken the succubus trope and turned it on its head with the addition of the denial fetish.

This story could easily turn into something horribly sinister. I have to admit that there are times when it makes me feel really nauseous. That however probably has more to do with me having been a victim of sexual abuse rather than the author’s actual intent (I hope). I’m taking the story at face value and trying really really hard not to read anything into it.

My mind often takes me to dark places because there are so many triggers but I’m trying to desensitise myself and deal with it.

Consent though is for me an absolute hard limit. I’m taking this story (or trying to) as light hearted comedy with a kink. This chapter challenges that approach.

The irony is, the idea of locking a succubus in chastity came up in one of my own brainstorming sessions only a week before I found this story. Still, they're different enough that I may still write it some day. (Mine is more about trying to get the succubus to forfeit a more traditional "deal with a demon" sort of situation while milking her (possibly literally) for secondary stuff stuff that won't get forfeited.)