by atenai
It definitely shows promise. I would love to see this developed further. Wish I had dreams like that lol
It's my birthday and this was a great gift! Well paced, intriguing, definitely worthy of more chapters!
Definitely worth revisiting. Please continue your story - I am very interested in how this will play out.
If you develop this into a story about why they have these dreams, who they are, and how they eventually meet, it could be great. It's a very good begining for sure.
Yes, yes, YES PLEASE! I beg you to continue this story! I have to know what happens! Keep orgasming and riding that high,ideal for the best of stories. One of my absolute favorites.
Emily