All Comments on 'Inappropriate Ch. 02'

He's trying to fight the inevitable.. Thanks for another chapter.

All characters have three digit IQs. Very uncommon..There's a lot of supporting roles here diluting the tension bur that's not a bad thing. The author is akin to master fly fisherman knowing when to increase or release pressure.

Very adept switching from taboo romantic drama to rom com. laden with potential, ultimate , guilty pleasure. Well played.

Great chapter. looking forward to the next one

Enjoying this a lot. Good characters, well written and edited. Thank you and keep it up. Don't leave us hanging!

Another extraordinary chapter with a natural flare of words compounded by mistry and suspence.what a perfect piece of art.

wonderful characters and story

When you have a story, post it. These silly little one page, go nowhere submissions are dull and stupid.

I really enjoyed reading this, great build up for the next chapter and i cant wait keep up the good work

This is one hell of a piece of literature you're developing here!!! Outstanding!! I can't wait to read the next part so I second the other comment, "Don't leave us hanging."

Never does it fail that there has to be an asshole making shitty, non-constructive, abusive remarks. Simply ignore his ignorant, illogical ass..."Nuff said."

Again, thank you for taking the time to write such a quality story.

Great story. I don't mind a slow build cause it makes me invest more in the characters and makes them seem more real. Keep up the great work.

The first one was great, I really liked it. You got a 5. This one was OK you only got a two,

It could have ended better after his sister wanted him . I kinda think he broke her heart.

please continue. hope some naughty wrestling wearing only short t shirt and string bikini panties then the panties slide to one side and the hairy pussy came into view.

It's hard to be truely best friends and siblings knowing right from wrong but in Love. You should continue with thus story and show thier dispair to love eachother. How about the girlfriend catches them in the act and it catapults the siblings into a sexual relationship. However they see the truth that they need to move somewhere thier not known.

poor writing, no character development, no background,way to rushed and no end all adds up to a waste of time. delete get a GOOD EDITOR and rewrite the series, if the rest of your stories are like this rewrite them also.

It makes me laugh the pieces of garbage that post nasty comments as anonymous. I thought the story and concept was great. I like the slow build with a turn here and there. Include a girlfriend. Add some jealousy then when it is right...let them go for it. Great job.

I thought the characters and build-up were quite well written, and I'd look forward to more. =)

dudes, dont fignt over a good story. this is very good build up and am sure this is going to be better and better. hats of to the very good start.

I hope you continue this story. It has real possibilities.....

MUCH better written than most of the crap on here.

Why haven't you continued this? It has real possibilities. Waiting...

Sorry for the long hiatus. Chapter 3 is pending approval. Thank you so much for the feedback and encouragement.

Enjoyed this very much. I can totally see the interplay between all the characters. These chapters are short, so please don't leave us hanging.

I never expected a Literotica story would make me cry. Good job, I'm gonna go hunt up your next chapter.

And it was short, like the last one but at least there is story and more than two unique characters.

This series is one of the best I have ever read. Really waiting for another series of this genre from you.

Still, a bit sort, but this chapter really blossomed.

.. much better.