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pepepilotpepepilotalmost 6 years ago
Awesome!

Unlike many of the longer stories, this one does well in keeping the mind wondering what will happen further into the future. I hated to see it end, but I also can understand that an ending would probably ruin everything. Keep up the great work!

MaximusTheMadMaximusTheMadalmost 2 years ago

Lets not forget that if son fucks mom and gest son, where did the x chromosome come from. Mom was the only ancestor providing DNA so the X chromosome magically appeared?

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I have had many comments over the years about how my characters or story endings are flawed, but that's on purpose. After twenty years with a large police department, I've learned that people are flawed and are constantly acting in ways that defy logic. It is that illogical me...