All Comments on '"Incest Submission": Mom, Nana & Son'

Never cease to amaze. 5*

"I thought cunt was a food group." Has to be one of the great lines in literature.

Score one more for SSL, the queen of this genre. 5*

older brother comes home and joins the fun mom and nana in corsets and heels

Adding in Auntie to the incestuous orgy great idea. Might want to move Nana to be closer to Master and Mistress. Also does Auntie Jill have any daughters who should be brought in as cousin sluts? And will mommy-slut, auntie-slut,or his cousin-slut(s)? get pregnant with his child?

Very nice, if you continue I think it would be a great idea for Simon and his mom take complete control of grandmas life. Make her sell her house and possesions and then have grandma move into their home and start living as both of theirs slave.

Just wanna say, AWESOME STORY! But what happened to his girlfriend? I could have sworn her name was the same as his mom's online mistress...?? Is she going to get involved some how?

Really hope this series will continue on, sooner rather than later!!

Hope to read more a out Simon. A good twist would mom,nana, and aunt get pregnant at the same time

Another great story. Just wish you wouldn't have so much time between chapters. Are you going to write chapter 3 with Auntie Jill? If so do you think you can get it out quicker?

hi all

thanks for the comments

that said... turn around us challenging for two reasons:

1. need a good plot idea

2. i have over 40 stories that fans request sequels. so choosing which ones are a challenge

that said, the more comments left the more likely a sequel...for example working on new what mom knows chapter which has over a 100 comments. not surprisingly the more requests the more likely a sequel... but I already release a story a week and can't fathom doing any more...i write for fun not as a career

jasmine dec 2015

Dec 2104 lol

Jasmine, you are one of my favorite writers on this site.

I think this definitely needs more than one sequel, but I understand it might take some time.

I just wish you exploit the ongoing jealousy between nana-slut & moma-slut in future chapters.

Your writing is such a turn on, Have gotten my sister to enjoy your writing also now. We enjoy each other so much after reading your stories TY

This is without a doubt the one of the best incest stories I've ever read on this site.

Thank you and please continue with Aunt Jill.

Was the reference about Jill a hint for a new storyline?

Oh I also vote for Aunt Jill. One year divorced, unemployed, down on her luck, circumstances making her destitute, kind of a non-consensual consent type of scene.

Good set of scenes, great use of words painting a very realistic video in my mind.

This one is my new favorite of hers : ) I love how it twisted and turned into a super nasty story. Instead of Aunt Jill though I would suggest Nana and Sara being tasked with seducing his almost forgotten girlfriend that mentioned at the beginning of chapter one.

This is a great story, makes you wonder how much of this goes on. Life would be so much more enjoyable if everyone was open. How close is fantasy to reality ??

Hugely entertaining, even the airport bit was extremely well written.

I just discovered your profile and I can tell i am going to love your stories. Especially since they have the hot symbol next to them. Your stories are exactly what i'm looking for. Please continue this story. Hope we wont have to wait too long.

Lovely Story!

Glad you add the Grandmother into this loving story! We do not see it often here in Lit.

Would love to see more stories with older ladies in lingerie in a very close family love relationship, like Grandmothers, Mothers-in-law and Aunties mmmmm

Thank you for yours ALL loving Stories!

Aunt Helena

54yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal

Great action! So Naughty! I love the way you think!

Having your mommy,her sexy mom and sister is every guy's fancy.

Thank you for your stories very, very enticing! I love the nana twist.......take your time in getting more stories out. Don't want them to be rushed.

Paul here love your stories you are the best on this site keep up the great writing

With Aunt Jill on the way, I can't wait to read what's next! Also, I think I remember a hint of a shopping trip somewhere along the way as well. Either way, please send it ASAP!

It was wonderful for Sara help her mother end her long drought of not getting fucked. Glenda was one hot grandma, who loved Simon's big hard cock. Both she, and Sara, enjoyed being told what to do when, "Simon Says!"

Loved it can't wait to see what happens when Auntie Jill comes to town

I hope to see Aunt Jill added to the harem soon. And I don't see a reason Nana wouldn't move in with them. He has to have a living Nana-slut.

I want to know how a young man is going to handle three sexy hot women with his aunt coming to visit, I want to read it please.

please put a part after aunt Jill where the older brother comes back for a visit, heard the other one was living in some city...

Marvelous story.

Oh Yes ! I hope Aunt Jill will come soon.

Small foreplay, but still great ending. Is aunt Jill coming by herself or with her own daughter. Maybe daughter virgin at 16?

Second time reading this for me and still hoping for this to be continued, you should get at least two more chapters with this story it's better than most I've read.

Held out well and used the build up to increase the stimulation. Would love to be part of that trio.

Very vivid prose with lust and desire overwhelming any (decent) sense of propriety; a perfect turn on: breaking taboos that beg to be broken.

fantastic story!!! reminds me so much of the time my mother in law was watching through the slightly open bedroom door as my wife and i were fucking and my wife saw her and told her to join us, which she did, and it was a complete shock as she came into the room and straight away undressed down to her panties suspenders and stockings, and bra, yes i too am obsessed by stockings and garters, and joined us on the bed, she also used similar language as in the story especially the very often use of the word 'cunt' which when coming from a woman really gets me going as its my favourite word

Read this a couple of times and wish you would continue it.

Always important for a man to take charge when fucking his mother, she should always be treated as a slut, making her do all the things he can envisage in his wildest fantasies.

Awesome incest story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Hard to appreciate that you are writing as a woman but with the perspective, you hit all the right notes, for a man. Never mind those that cannot recognize a "love story" or object to the frequent use of the word "cunt," a perfect word if there ever was one (in the context of your thesis). You are the Mark Twain in this category. I actually feel guilty getting to use your work product for free; your talent and skill deserve to be rewarded monetarily and not just with unintelligible reviews ... Where should I send the check?

Advice: Stop thanking your editors. They're not helping as much as you might think.

Does Nana move in? If yes, then I have to ask is Aunt Jill married? Is she a single lesbian? If she is a lesbian, does she have a significant other or just some FWB? Does she come to visit the family or investigate why Nana has moved in with Sis?

I haven't read the first one yet but this was great. such horniness and abandon. I wish I were that wild myself, not with mom, but with someone playing out this scenario.

So when is Auntie Jill visiting, I wanna watch

I very much love the story hope you do some more about the three of them and the sister

Love the story, want son to breed mom, or breed someone, and add to the family

Hi Jasmine, great story "Incest Submission": Mom, Nana & Son. I really enjoyed and reading the last paragraph and seeing "Is auntie Jill coming to visit anytime soon?" I loved that.. I hope you are planning on a story with Auntie Jill.

I can hardly wait to read more.

David

I liked it especially the expletives toward the end that was hot....

One of the best Please Please Please add to this story

I really enjoyed the story. Both the sex and the character interactions were very enjoyable.

So . . .when IS Aunt Jill coming to visit? LOL

brings back a lot of memories of when I used to eat and tongue fucked my mother's cunt and asshole damn I miss fucking her anyway I get to fuck and eat my aunty ( my moms only sister ) as well as my sisters cunt and asshole but right now I'm inside my best friends big fat juicy smooth bald cock hungry cunt terrific story made me hard and horny the whole time

Great story please keep it going Simon needs some more holes to fill with cock and cum.

where her sister comes to visit

The one We read before was better than this , which is good but with the Pictures it was better showing real live ladies rather than cartoons GOOD GOING GIRL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Hi

This was never rewritten and never had pictures.

Sorry,

I was turned on the entire time I read. I really hope you make a part 3.

THIS WAS SO AMAZING !! MY DICK WAS HARD ON BOTH 1& 2, AN NOW READING IT AGAIN ! NVER SEEN ANYTHING LIKE IT, CANT WAIT FOR A SEQUEL. LOVE YOUR WORK .fVnWJz

This was very good. Just a suggestion (in the event there might be a 3rd part), I would like to see the focus stay on Sara and Simon since they are the basis for any of this happening. Mom/Son incest is the best imo. But thanks for the read. 5. -dave

this is so fuccking hot, please do well to write the next part.

I enjoyed your story very much, I liked the idea of mother and 'Nana' and at the end the possibility of Aunt Jill being included too... I hope there is more to come (Cum!)

I truly love reading your stories! You are a tremendously talented author, gifted in capturing imagination & mind of the reader in such a way that leaves them raptured & lusting for each next word in the tales you have penned. In an era where pictures & videos flood the web, your writing coaxes powerful erotic desires from the reader in ways that are stronger than pictures & videos can ever do. You remind us that words have true power. I find myself disappointed when reaching the end of your stories, hoping that I won't be disappointed that other stories didn't live up to the one I just read. So far I have not been disappointed as I have enjoyed every story that I have read (though I have not read all of your or anyone's stories yet). I want to thank you for sharing your gifts & talents with us readers.

-Sincerely,

Male reader, 38

WISH I COULD HAVE THEM BOTH, THEY WOULD HAVE OVER 100 LOADS TO SWALLOWED AND CUMMED TOO!

One of the best mom-son-gram stories ever, with no hesitations from any of the three

players, each of them wanting it all. Great Read! Thanx!

Both stories , GREAT. I love the way you tell a storie

This is the best incest story I've ever read. I hope I can find more like it to enjoy.

need to put baby in to mommy slut

Really enjoyed this. It took me ages to finish it because I kept stopping to play with myself. Please let Aunty Jill come to visit in chapter 3!

Love that last line. It was a perfect finisher.

Very well done, we need to see what happens with jill

It started well but quickly became a bit silly. Not one of your best.

Terrific story. Totally took me over the edge.

I enjoyed it alot.

How about a part 3 including the aforementioned aunt?

You should do more of this series.

Wow that was really hot!!!

My Mom and I became "Pen Pals"when I was deployed in the Middle-East...and towards the end of my tour, our e-mails started getting rather steamy. When I returned to the world, I fucked her. Thanks for revivng the memory

Very good fantasy, very hot and kept me up. Thanks for writing it's appreciated

Okay...you wrote it..."When IS Aunt Jill coming to visit?!"...You can be a crowd-pleaser, and write that sequel!

Thanks for this story, very nice...very nasty...your imagination is....MMMMMM, GGOOOOOODDDDD!

**5** STARS!!

"Is auntie Jill coming to visit anytime soon?"

LMAO, this is awesome xD

Hopefully Auntie Jill has gorgeous virgin daughters and just maybe Simon develops a medical condition that has him producing excessive amounts of sperm, oh the mind boggles.

And the meat goes on!

Incest threesome and a hint(?) maybe a foursome next on his incest plate. All cunts for one cock and one cock for all cunts (and of course the myriad of other combinations available). Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

that was super hot

Wow. This was so familiar. Did I read it previously? No matter. They are good whether once or more often. More family fucks?

Good series. Although written some time ago, I would like to see the series refreshed. Another logically constructed story. The rivalry between mother and daughter is understandable. Since both the daughter and mother want the daughter to be domme, it would beinteresting to see this relationship develop. Likewise, this reader would like to see the interaction between mother and daughter, both submissive to Simon, when he is required to punish one or both of his submissives.

We need a sequel with Auntie Jill, and her 2 18+ year-old daughters.

Make mommy pregnant so her son can suckle her milk-filled tits. Nana too!

It’s hRd to write another chapter and keep it fresh. You succeeded fairly well with this tale.

Bill S.

Fantastic!

Why just one glorious session? The story begs to continue the taboo fun in other rooms, backyard, outdoors, boating, nudist resort, traveling together to sexy destinations and at other times, next morning, next afternoon, next night. There is room for the relationships to grow deeper.

An EXCELLENT erotic fantasy, great reading, well prepared and executed, appears to have been properly proofread and edited.

Where's part 3 with the aunt?

I see you’re planning a sequel I look forward to it

Love your stories waiting for Auntie Jills story

Brilliant! Full Marks 5 - stars!

Adding grandma to the menagerie is a nice touch.

Love the Story. You really know how to make a man HOT !

ABSOLUTELY FUCKIN AWESOME...

Made my cock so hard!

Wonderful Silk Stockings and you kept it cumming and taking it higher until it was time to come down out of the clouds . . .