All Comments on 'Young Nephew'

You said you had sex with your cousin? It reads like he had a wet dream and he came on your back. That's it , there was nothing about penetration.

In response to "WHAT???"; you should note that the author said "end of chapter one" (indicating that there was more to come). You are too quick to trigger.

I personally don't give a hoot about spelling or grammar here, so long as the author makes their point. From what I've read, this is not necessarily a fiction, but more a true life event written in the author's own words. Thank you for sharing.

Anonymous can hide a lot of stuff, even pseudo editors. Let's not forget that this is an amateur site.

Bob

Help is all this storie needs on the grammar and spelling besides hat it is wonderfull so far I look Forward to more

Sorry to any readers, The mistakes are now in plain view to me when someone else points it out.

Wow, This actually happened to me! Details a little different, but close enough to give me chills. I am still close to her today.

Thank you for a sweet and very believable story. I look forward to reading the rest of your series

was with my youngest brother...I am the oldest of five siblings. most sexual thing I've ever done!

Good reading for part one

Dindnt really noticed mistakes un til pointed out never the less good reading

Why didn’t you jack him off or sucked him off, omg I bet he would have let you, I know I would have then I would have asked to fuck you.

All aunts and nephews should experience such uninhibited sex. When my aunt showed me attention, my mother switched from teasing to seduction.

Hard to read. Just a bunch of words cobbled together.

Now; Meh ....but nice beginning and great premise , but it will probably be a 2 -4 Chapter write.

Good Luck