All Comments on 'Incestuous Blackmail'

This story is identical to your previous story "Inadvertent Incest" submitted just a week or two ago. I have never understood why a writer would submit the exact same story more than once with no explanation. It makes no sense whatsoever. The other story wasn't bad, so I gave it a few stars, but the very fact that you are submitting the very same story under a different name leads me to mark this a zero.

This version of the story was much more flushed out. The little problems and inconsistencies were cleaned up. We now know more of the background and can follow the story more believably. Although the comments on the first story were not all voiced as helpfully as they could have been you took the meaning and fixed the problems. This new version is quite a nice effort. I enjoyed reading it.

the non consent catagory?

What's the tie in to National Nude Day?

Please write more to this story!