All Comments on 'Incident in Room 232'

Interesting .

This vignette has nary a wasted word; of course, like many vignettes it leaves you puzzled and unsatisfied. Definitely more sophisticated than is usual for Literotica.

It is great to be creative, and you are. But you also need to be clear in your story, which you are not. I do not plan to re-read this story to figure it out.