All Comments on 'Incubus Ale Ch. 01'

Totally awesome start to what could be a wonderful series - can't wait for the next chapter!

Bring on chapter two, I wanna see where this is going.

This is your first story here, but I'd guess you've had a fair bit of practice at writing. You tell a good story, and you tell it well. 5/5

Can't wait to read more

More, please I need more

Wow brilliant story

Great debut. Cannot wait to see where this goes

Can't wait for more 5/5

That's your first effort, seriously?! Very well done, I hope there are multiple installments yet to come!!

I don't get it. The story is set up at the end to continue, but that was 2 years ago. Thus it begs the question: what happened to the author or with the story? It's too bad, for everything in the story was pointing towards foreshadowed events. Normally, for a majority of stories, I wouldn't care, yet this one was quite well written, and it seems I'm not the only person sucked in and hoping for closure of the points raised, making the excercise of writing this in the first place feel rather pointless.