All Comments on 'Incubus Ch. 01'

Nice story.

Words have power. And fortunately he seems like a good and honorable sort. Strangely I'm interested in his 'relatives' but I don't mean brothers. Educated as he seems to be, I'm curious as to how he will achieve his goal.

Please write more I want to see where this goes. I am hooked....

Well written. Tentacles aren't my thing, but good job

Nice start to what seems like an awsome series

Never read a tentacle novel, would totally keep reading

So this demon is the son of Saban eh? Well he isn't as fun as his father but I can't help but love the way you've tied the stories together in a minor way. They don't need to ever intersect but the small touch is very nice.

So is Anita his mother?

Good start.