All Comments on 'Indecent Connections Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please don't share Ava.

I noticed it was on her 'dislikes' list but oddly enough Ava reminds me a lot of Amy from 'Luke & Amy'. Luke & Amy started great, going on sensually, beautiful even. Then at one point Luke, just like Aiden, used toys, encouraging DP. Then there was this friend, Matt I think, started as a voyeur, and Luke brainwashed Amy into a threesome. Pretty much ruining the beautiful story. I think the author abandoned the story after 11chapters. I hope Aiden won't become 'Luke' and this Eric guy to 'Matt'. I know you're the author and its up to you on how you write, it is your story after all, its just that Amy and Aiden seems so perfect for each other and now that romance is invoked, its beautiful. Sexy and sensual story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
agree with others

i absolutely agree with the other comment, a threesome would definitely ruin this series, i know it sounds like a good fantasy idea but it is s killer, personally (and I'm sure others agree) one to one loving relationship stories are better. Please don't introduce another partner, keep their tryst between them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ch.08!

Can't wait for another chapter, been looking twice a day for the next instalment! Yeah agree on the 3some issues, even though Aiden most likely won't share Ava, but after that anon mentioned luke&amy, 3s is a major killer be it mff or mmf. But please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I hope you haven't given up on this series, maybe you are busy or you are in the process of writing 2 chapters to post at once. Either way fantastic job so far, I keep checking regularly for more of this story.

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