All Comments on 'Indecent Connections Ch. 12'

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Rawmaster50Rawmaster50about 9 years ago
Asshole friend

Pushing his way in where he is not wanted. I do not know where this is going but Ava and Aiden will have to find a way to deal with their relationship, Good luck with the rest of the story, 5 stara

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Its Luke & Amy..

This is Luke & Amy. Threesome ensued. Way to ruin what could had become a beautiful story.. If Aiden been a man and kicked Eric' ass that would be something else, and could runaway with Ava where nobody knows them. Threesome always ruin a great story. By the way, welcome back GoodyGoodyTwoShoes..

SoftKtty24SoftKtty24almost 3 years ago

I really live this story. Minor grammar errors, nevertheless a well written and thought out story.

My only question about this particular Chapter 12, is why did you have Aiden not play it off when Eric, really, "assumed" he was right about his suspensions?

Should they reay trust Eric. Keep writing, I know I'm going to be one of those greedy reader fans begging for a trilogy...lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

hundred percent ruined the story that was a terrible outcome really loved the story till you brought eric into it was going to read the next chapter but this chapter was a complete buzz kill .1/5 on this chapter

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