All Comments on 'Indecent Proposal Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I liked the story but hate cheating or a spouse having to endure this kind of hardship. I would like one more chapter detailing the aftermath of the trip and the impact it has on her family. No matter how you talk this one out she was basically a50000 dollar prostitute , she was paid to fuck a coworker. How will hubby ever trust her at work knowing she spent a week in parodies fucking a coworker for money. He will always wonder about what she did how she liked it was he better than him is she thinking of him while back at home and most of all will she continue to sneak around at work fucking him. Marriage over I would think there's no undoing what she feels and thinks about and how hubby can handle it. Maybe he fucked someone while she was away to feel even , who knows

SuddenThunderSuddenThunderalmost 9 years ago
Naive at best to think that anything good could come from this hackneyed and cliche storyline

In real life the marital connection is altered and all the kings horses and all the kings men can't put it back together again. What we do know is the value that the woman puts on herself and that she is just another whore.

Sex workers face this problem all of the time and their partnerships rarely survive. Once cash is involved sex for love only is only a pipe dream, no matter what others may tell you.

I couldn't read it all.

bigdnc13bigdnc13almost 9 years ago
Are You Going to Finish?

Good story, but it needs at least another chapter. What happens to the marriage? Does she become Daddy's slut? How can they act normally around each other after all the fucking?

nixroxnixroxalmost 2 years ago

0 star - stupid cuck/wimp crap - a really bad idea.

I did not get past the first page.

WargamerWargameralmost 2 years ago

Stupid, how would the marriage survive?

It wouldn’t, jealousy is a killer and the wife is a slut whore.

Yeah, another chapter would’ve been good if the slut had lost her marriage and family due to her prostitution.

But no, we’ll just this useless Cuck story.

Scores 1/5

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