by shiprat
Excellent writing as usual from you!
Please bring out the coming chapters soon.
Happy to see you here. The quality of Indian stories here on Literotica has fallen lately.
This is one of my most fav...this is your take on Rupanita story Maids Hudband i guess....its lovely...and hope u also continue it till the blackmail with water/acid....i am eagerly waiting for next update....would like to get in touch with you for personnel messages....my mail ID is anita_bhat2003@yahoo.com
i am glad you wrote this story. fantastic. i love your work. best wishes for future endevrs
But unfortunately rupanita didn’t cover about her sister and how Bhasu laid his hands on her .. I hope your next chapters will be as good as this
Your arrival was much awaited QueenT! I know you deleted your last post, but I'd like you to post it back. It's an expression of art.
Look forward to much more.
A fond fan!
Love this story, its wonderfully written, organised and best of all it has a realistic storyline. Great work!
Extremely erotic and exciting.. waiting for the next few parts
I love it dear it's a kinda story of my taste !! Make it a long run !!
Read all chapters. One suggestion don't make this another submission story. If it is Non consent it should remain same throughout. The heroine of this story should never submit and should fight back the villain and win
This is brilliant writing. So brilliant in fact, that it is a little unnerving. Makes me feel like it really happened
One of the worst ever read! Want to know why Because this is a clear plagiarized version of bdrew's story Remarkable Phase of my life. Utterly Disappointed.
Always have liked the way you bring up the scenes in details. Just Great...
Amaaaaaazing Shiprat!!!! its a privilege to read your story now and its amazing you write again. 5 star as always.one Indian to another
Reading another of your story after that foggy night.. both in 1 day and see such nice variation here. Keep it up.