by shiprat
Great writing.. love the way you are keeping the intensity in each story.. Can you give more details on how she looks and dresses..
I love where this is going. I'd love to see her sold to a brothel for a time, even if it's only a week or two.
Needed that .. make her a slut who had a train go in the local dhaba
Your efforts are much appreciated, your story writing skills are very good
Every scene can be imagined , please continue writing!!!!!!!!
This is becoming a classic....everytime I wonder what next and you are doing better than before!...each part is taking it to next height....I cant wait for next....plz wanna get in touch with you Shiprat!
I love your new work , especially the psychologist angle is completely new and gives it more enjoyable .
Awesome stuff !! Very well written and looks so real. The element of control and the desire for the unknown is amazing !!
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Hi Shiprat, Big Fan of yours !! I wish this story becomes more and more erotic !! :)
Good plot well written. Impatiently waiting for the next chapter
Logging in every day to check the update.. hope it happens soon!
Please update soon...you have a great potential to build up this story
Their is no update for a while I was a true follower of this story in Xossip. Please give us an update soon
hi we are egarly waited for next part it's long time.where is the next part. please post the next part.
Your other stories are amazing. In this one it would be wonderful for him to coerce her into a marriage, even if not legal, and for her to accept him as a husband. His condition would be for her to prove it by carrying a child for him, the ultimate proof that commits them together forever. Her husband thinks it's his baby, but lallan makes sure it's his child and maybe even organises his friends to watch them try to conceive, as a demonstration of his control over her.
I don't know.
The rapist becomes lover!
There has to be redemption. Lallan must die.
Hey.. no is this the end of the story or any updates coming anytime soon.
Dear shiprat. Please dont end this story yet. It must b just the beginning
Shiprat Please Update the story. It's nice story. Please update.
Awesome work. I really hope you continue this story. Its great to have you back.
Please update your really nice story. We are waiting for long time. Update.
threesome with lalan, her and her over achiever boss would awesome. boss could not resist to checkout guy who turn her best student/employee into slave.
Shipratji Please come back with your story. We are egarly waiting for your nice story.
please uplod next part.
your story had me shaking, because i got so horny!
Please continue this series.
He should take her boss, so she understands ;)
Hey Shipra!
I understand that Shikha is under influence of Liquor and Lallan a lot these days and now is addicted to both the miseries. Nita is trying best to save her from the further abuses and also framed her mind that Shikha is somehow Mistress of Lallan..
But in the story, Parvati and Shikha have suffered and Lallan came out to be a true Casanova and now he is also sharing the Social Worker with other lower grade guys.
Now that Anup is in town and who loves Shikha dearly, can you try and infuence Shikha that she follows Nita's suggestions and Anup to be supportive it whatever had happened in the past, as it didn't start on by Shikha's account but she was a victim initially.
Somehow, a true character social person is being punished for the great service she's been doing and a abusive and drunkard low level guy is partying around and sharing Shikha as if she is a whore.
I do appreciate your ideas of the story and have been a fan on Exbii and Literotica, but this time the true hero is being beaten, abused and being out of line.
Thanks
Koolme98
Shipra, Start of the story, I thought you are attempting another rewrite of the old story, however, your story had nice variation and became interesting. Last one forth of this chapter seems to be written in haste and assume that you don't have time to finish this story or ran out of what to write to continue this story.
thanks for this fantastic story and I am very fond of your stories. Most of your stories basic theme is bdsm type (abusive) but when you receive any abusive reply about the story, you got angry. this is not fair. if you do not like ignore and only see the appreciating message.
all fans request you please continue your story.
This is one of most fantastic well written stories I have ever seen. The language, the scenes, the characters all are fantastic. I humbly request to Mr. Shiprat to give this story a proper conclusion.
this is one of the greatest story i have read on literotica..I have been coming every few days to check if an update was posted.
shiprat you are top writers we have here. Please continue your story!!! your fans are waiting to hear from you. Please don't disappoint us!!
Shipra I was not on this site registered before. Its just to give you complement to be able to read more of your Excellent work I registered. I have read all of your stories and Aurelius1982. You both are legends. Please keep up the same and we will shower all the clapsss for you.
Just to make it clear for everyone, this is the end of the story. There is nothing more left for me to narrate.