All Comments on 'Indian Social Worker and the Bully Ch. 03'

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arch3rarch3ralmost 6 years ago
Superb!!!!

Very hot!! You are an accomplished writer!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Unbelievable storyline

Great writing.. love the way you are keeping the intensity in each story.. Can you give more details on how she looks and dresses..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
great

I love where this is going. I'd love to see her sold to a brothel for a time, even if it's only a week or two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Thanks for making it a gangbang

Needed that .. make her a slut who had a train go in the local dhaba

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good

When we can expect next update

rock69rollrock69rollalmost 6 years ago
hot indeed

beautiful narration.. very arousing !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great Story and Thank you for your efforts

Your efforts are much appreciated, your story writing skills are very good

Every scene can be imagined , please continue writing!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome story

When will next update come?

anita_bhat2018anita_bhat2018almost 6 years ago
Wow!!!

This is becoming a classic....everytime I wonder what next and you are doing better than before!...each part is taking it to next height....I cant wait for next....plz wanna get in touch with you Shiprat!

sweetdreamsssssweetdreamssssalmost 6 years ago
You are one of the best Indian authors out here

I love your new work , especially the psychologist angle is completely new and gives it more enjoyable .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Do continue the story !!

Awesome stuff !! Very well written and looks so real. The element of control and the desire for the unknown is amazing !!

lordandmaster07@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome !!

Hi Shiprat, Big Fan of yours !! I wish this story becomes more and more erotic !! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
please post the ch04

when you will post the chapter 4

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Waiting for the next one

Good plot well written. Impatiently waiting for the next chapter

KragxyzKragxyzalmost 6 years ago
Waiting

Eagerly waiting for your next part ....... :)

foogyusfoogyusalmost 6 years ago
awesome

so any chance of an update anytime soon.

rock69rollrock69rollalmost 6 years ago
excruciating wait

Logging in every day to check the update.. hope it happens soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Review

Very nice plotting of characters eagerly waiting for the next part

manlee2925manlee2925almost 6 years ago

We are egarly waited next part. Please post it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Waiting for the next part... Please poat

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Please update

Please update soon...you have a great potential to build up this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Update

Their is no update for a while I was a true follower of this story in Xossip. Please give us an update soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow

Nice build up waiting eagerly for next part

manlee2925manlee2925almost 6 years ago

hi we are egarly waited for next part it's long time.where is the next part. please post the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Let her marry him as husband and conceive her first child by him.

Your other stories are amazing. In this one it would be wonderful for him to coerce her into a marriage, even if not legal, and for her to accept him as a husband. His condition would be for her to prove it by carrying a child for him, the ultimate proof that commits them together forever. Her husband thinks it's his baby, but lallan makes sure it's his child and maybe even organises his friends to watch them try to conceive, as a demonstration of his control over her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I don't know.

The rapist becomes lover!

There has to be redemption. Lallan must die.

foogyusfoogyusalmost 6 years ago
nice story

Hey.. no is this the end of the story or any updates coming anytime soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Dear shiprat. More please. Its already a month now. Almost

Dear shiprat. Please dont end this story yet. It must b just the beginning

manlee2925manlee2925almost 6 years ago
Update the story

Shiprat Please Update the story. It's nice story. Please update.

SusmittaSusmittaalmost 6 years ago
Awesome

That is awesome. Keep updating and blasting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Shiprat

Update dear we are waiting here for so long

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great Story, Can't wait till the next chapter

Awesome work. I really hope you continue this story. Its great to have you back.

manlee2925manlee2925almost 6 years ago

Please update your really nice story. We are waiting for long time. Update.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

threesome with lalan, her and her over achiever boss would awesome. boss could not resist to checkout guy who turn her best student/employee into slave.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
next chapter

frustrating wait for the next chapter

donthepoetdonthepoetalmost 6 years ago
more!

You must write more chapters on this story! It is really good!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Come back

Eagerly waiting for Chapter 4 please come back.

manlee2925manlee2925almost 6 years ago

Please came back your nice story. We are egarly waiting.

manlee2925manlee2925almost 6 years ago

Shipratji Please come back with your story. We are egarly waiting for your nice story.

please uplod next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
next chapter pleaaaase

your story had me shaking, because i got so horny!

Please continue this series.

He should take her boss, so she understands ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Superb but Sad!

Hey Shipra!

I understand that Shikha is under influence of Liquor and Lallan a lot these days and now is addicted to both the miseries. Nita is trying best to save her from the further abuses and also framed her mind that Shikha is somehow Mistress of Lallan..

But in the story, Parvati and Shikha have suffered and Lallan came out to be a true Casanova and now he is also sharing the Social Worker with other lower grade guys.

Now that Anup is in town and who loves Shikha dearly, can you try and infuence Shikha that she follows Nita's suggestions and Anup to be supportive it whatever had happened in the past, as it didn't start on by Shikha's account but she was a victim initially.

Somehow, a true character social person is being punished for the great service she's been doing and a abusive and drunkard low level guy is partying around and sharing Shikha as if she is a whore.

I do appreciate your ideas of the story and have been a fan on Exbii and Literotica, but this time the true hero is being beaten, abused and being out of line.

Thanks

Koolme98

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Waiting for proper conclusion of the story

Shipra, Start of the story, I thought you are attempting another rewrite of the old story, however, your story had nice variation and became interesting. Last one forth of this chapter seems to be written in haste and assume that you don't have time to finish this story or ran out of what to write to continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
great story

thanks for this fantastic story and I am very fond of your stories. Most of your stories basic theme is bdsm type (abusive) but when you receive any abusive reply about the story, you got angry. this is not fair. if you do not like ignore and only see the appreciating message.

all fans request you please continue your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This is hot!

Please continue this story, we are all waiting for it.

Kman280585Kman280585over 5 years ago
A Masterpiece

This is one of most fantastic well written stories I have ever seen. The language, the scenes, the characters all are fantastic. I humbly request to Mr. Shiprat to give this story a proper conclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
wonderful story

this is one of the greatest story i have read on literotica..I have been coming every few days to check if an update was posted.

shiprat you are top writers we have here. Please continue your story!!! your fans are waiting to hear from you. Please don't disappoint us!!

pervymkinky1pervymkinky1over 5 years ago
What a Mix of Talent and Art of Expression!

Shipra I was not on this site registered before. Its just to give you complement to be able to read more of your Excellent work I registered. I have read all of your stories and Aurelius1982. You both are legends. Please keep up the same and we will shower all the clapsss for you.

shipratshipratover 5 years agoAuthor
It's the End

Just to make it clear for everyone, this is the end of the story. There is nothing more left for me to narrate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Please don't do this nice story. Please continue this nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Reach to some end

Is this the end of story? Please continue.

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A typical atypical Indian woman. My stories, entirely fictional, explore some dark and disturbing fetishes of mine. Infidelity, humiliation, abuse, cuckolding, and playing with taboos related to social status and age. These are just dark fantasies meant for entertainment purpo...