by YamiMalik
very boring, completely mechanical description of sex
You lack both a story and the skill to narrate one. Quite sad!
It was so funny how he was trying to predict the color of the baby by color of their parent. Sure, the color of parents influences that but he wrote it as if he was mixing colors for painting. Completely stupid.
Good story.
And if you would be described the wife's contentedness about the new feeling in sex it would be so nice.
Quite a cold story but a good theme. I think you should have focused more on the wife enjoying sex with a well endowed black bull rather than her weaker husband. This is an interracial story right so use the excitement and taboo of black cock sex to make it exciting and dangerous. She would have let herself go, lose her inhibitions and indulged herself with this stud. Once you go black you don’t go back.
He is very racist and also very stuck up and nerdy but he is forced to hire a Black Guy to knock up his Wife. Its also funny that he is forced into thst situation by Indian culture, classism and caste system. His blatant racism is funny given his situation. Seidah is right about the sex though. Sure the Wife was wet and arozsed, but Leroy should have fucked so good, making her cum hard and scream the hozse down