All Comments on 'Indigofera Ch. 02'

As you explained the errors in Comments at the end of chapter 1, I must commend your efforts. I studied Spanish for two years in elementary school, French for one year in Jr. High and Latin for two years in Sr. High, retaining less than 5 percent due to lack of use. The story, itself, is quite good and shows a lot of promise. I look forward to many more chapters.

interesting premise!! but syory still don't make much sense

You talk too much. Just narrate the story n stop pouring out every ounce of mediocre humour thoughts u have.

Story it interesting but would like to see more than just one page at a time.

Now for the next chapter