All Comments on 'Indulging Sin'

It was different, but different is good.

I like the idea that you immediatly didn't go in to sexual scenes. Most writers tend to do that and all it does is bore you to death. Yeah, we come to read about sex, but you draw it out. Not to mention you give details and you dive into more than one fetish rather than just stay on one.

Good job!

I know it's supposed to be weird but I didn't like this one at all. Also the stupid spelling mistakes spoil the flow of the story. Make sure that you double proof read everything before you submit it.

The story wasn't that bad. I did like the character development, even though the characters were cliched a little, but still entertaining.

I do agree that it's weird, but it was good. I give it a 4 1/2 out of 5.

your ending was a little bit too sudden. I'm still confused as to what happened to lucy and janet. the rest of the story was well written and i enjoyed the strangeness of the events (it's different from just regular sex stories).

Please revise and grow in your authorship.

In a good way ;)

What a bunch of crap!!!

I couldn’t finish this. The constant tense changes and misspellings just made it too clunky to read.