All Comments on 'Inescapable Pt. 01 of 02'

If magic like yours existed outside of stories like these, the world would be an infinitely better place to live in. Please keep writing.

Fantastic all round. I really love all things Film Noir so the P.I angle was great, as was the twist. Great sexy story and looking forward to part 2.

If you aren’t publishing on Amazon/Kindle, you should consider it. But finish this story first. It is as finely written a story as one is likely to find anywhere. Excellent work!

Your just a damn fine writer.

wow this is just amazing!! I'm wishing I was marci! that would be a dream come true!

Great story, fantastic storytelling.

Almost perfect.

I loved the concept and execution. Great characters, believable dialog and some real imagination and introspection of what a person in this situation might go through intellectually and emotionally.

My one criticism is that the sex is lacking in descriptive detail. Sometimes I wish you would slow down the pace and give your readers a more explicit (pun intended) rendering of a scene to build our arousal and subsume ourselves in the fantasy.

Overall, great job, 5 stars.