All Comments on 'Inferidelity Ch. 01'

That was intense. Please continue.

Wow.

Our sex life was fine, but not perfect. Two years after our first kid, we wanted to have a second, just in time for my wife's thirtieth.

We had everything in life: great jobs, a beautiful five-year old daughter, our dream home, and a pretty damn good marriage.

So which was it a two year old or five?

"I've got options."

So does he.

You have a good story buried in here somewhere. It could be just me, but it felt like the story of a loose fire hose just spraying where it will. This might be worth a revision.

Thanks for trying. CD

Just terrific writing.

A lot of people hate these stories, because they don't like the theme. As someone who loves it, I'd say it's very well written.

This one is intense

You wrote wonderfully would love to read further

I'm happy to have stumbled on your stories. You have a great imagination for unique characters driven by complex impulses.

I find it hard to believe your profile identity as male, because I think your female characters are your strongest and most complicated characters. You do what seems to me to be a great job of expressing how sex makes women feel about themselves.

In my favorite stories, authors have the male characters submit to feelings of shame and humiliation. In this story you haven't (yet) gone there). My heroes eat creampies and submit to the wife's lover. Any chance you'll do a second chapter?

Don

all the Gurkas have left town and there are no real men left in the whole of India and Pakistan region. to mess with the wife of one of them would have been a fatal mistake..

1. One of Indian diplpmates found stain on the bedcloth. He sent the bedclots to a DNA laboratory and the stain belonged to stranger man's sperm. The diplomat divorced his wife.

2. Dangerouslydead is an excellent Indian BTB author, but the plot of his most stories is in the USA.............

I love this story. So, so much.

Please write more.

I hope she dumps his dumbass, A man who shares his wife should lose her everytime and then get fucked in the ass cuz hes a flaming fag

Incredibly hot. I am addicted to her as well.

Then she should divorce his loser ass and get a real husband.

If thats the only way they can feel anything then end this travesty of a marriage.

voting on this site is truly unfair.

we should be able to vote the way this story moves us

we should be able to cast negative votes

i would also like to see both die in a flaming car wreak

But first, kudos for taking on a tough topic that is loathed by a good half the readers here, and distasteful to many of the rest of us. You captured a lot of emotions and feelings, but the underlying motives for the behaviors are questionable to say the least.

If dude ends up smelling like shit, a lot of us are going to be saying it was inevitable given such crappy people for characters.

OTOH, I am not sure how you could write people with such small regard for fidelity and parentage as sympathetic. You would need Rehnquist or Josephus level game to do so. You are pretty good, but not even near that level.

Thanks for sharing, tis a sordid and neon light, but it still illuminated some ponderable aspects of human failing.

I prize originality -- that was original! Perverted beyond belief (ha, ha) but certainly original. 5*

I'm with amyyum. Totally weird, but SO hot & original. Found myself wanting to tell them, "No, stop!" But couldn't any more than they could. Dangerous writing, getting inside the head like that! Keep it up, ignore the trolls!

Hubby and Sweetie are portrayed as great friends, and have learned to (and do) communicate with each other with great openness and objective judgment. But, they are no longer lovers, if they ever were. They both knew they were taking risks, but neither realized what the most important of those risks were. Not disease, not even pregnancy from the ‘wrong’ sire. Sweetie realized it first and conveyed it to Hubby, who finally realized it. It was not even about considering ‘trading up’ in life-style.

Patel, in all his repulsiveness, was simply NOT safe to be introduced into their tenuous marital relationship. I think the future is inescapable. It might even work out for Hubby, if he can can find a woman with whom he can maintain a sense of passion.

5*

This was a pretty hot tale. I would love to be in that husband's shoes and would also love her becoming pregnant with his baby.

It goes to show that the female of the species cannot be trusted when you dangle a carrot in their faces. They are weak and untrustworthy when it comes to the matters of the heart.

The sex is hotter than their passion. At least you described well the action with Patel--but hubby isn't really sure he saw it all, and she is keeping secrets. Sooooo, were both of them simply going through the motions, but now are inflamed?

Your descriptions of his/her actions and reactions are not fluid, which might be intentional. Seduction that connects all the dots in an unmistakeable fashion can be boring in spite of its heat. I like your adding more uncertainty to this whole scenario. Usually uncertainty forces presumptive and passive husbands to become more primal and assertive. But this level of uncoordination, both in their relationship and in the story's plot, leave me confused.

a series begun on Literotica a few years ago in LW told from the POV of a Pakistani camera man married to a hot Indian reporter? Their profession took the film crew onto a new Indian submarine for sea trials where the very patriotic, charismatic captain began a seduction of the wife, who appeared to the husband to be quite willing.

It was hot writing, and the topics and setting and characterizations all could have been very inflammatory if Lit were a mainstream site.

Then the series was pulled. Not surprising.

Wondering if anyone knows anything about it, now that some time has passed. I was very disappointed when the story was taken down, but hey, fantasy sex is not important enough to get anybody killed or hurt or fired in real life.

It’s really sad that he doesn’t realize just how much of a loser he is to spend hours each day posting his hate filled comments on all of these stories. But thankfully the rest of us know.

This was a great story, much superior than other offerings lately, but alas it was only great up to a point. This was the point where it reached its apex:

"That statement just left me floored. She could see it."

This was the point where we could delve into the deep urgings and dangers of cuckolding. It is the ultimate in pain and potential consequence. Their game may have ruined their marriage by exposing her to another man she could fall for. I actually stopped reading for a moment because the tension was so great. I didn't think I could take what might have been coming. You could have made a great, deep, complex, and anxiety-producing story about the complexities of cuckolding but you simply delved back in to the silly taboo of being more aroused than any other time in his life. And it got completely stupid when she says "I've got options." You have to realize why there are some people who simply hate cuckold stories. It is this level of dumb banality. He is too stupid to stop playing with fire because his dick is too hardwired, then all the tension is not in the character, but in the reader, how f'ed up is this going to get? Now I want him to dump her, and someone to hit him in the head with a shovel to wake him tf up.

Despite this, I gave you three stars for the promising beginning. It was definitely four stars before then and might have even earned a five depending on how you resolved this chapter. Too bad you went for shallow thrills rather than deeper meaning. I probably won't be reading further installments.

Since you never finished that story, you might not finish this one. Seeing where it is going, that might be a good thing.

There's always the possibility she would want to trade up. Always.

I guess that's the part of the fetish, right - the risk of losing your wife, even to someone you deemed beneath you.

Which makes the character of Patel really strange - how can he be this guy's coworker if he's richer and more financial successful than him? How exactly does that work?

In any case... what we have here is two pretty sick individuals, more concern about their sexual gratification than with anyone else in their life (definitely including their own daughter...), and one sad, poor bastard who's turning into their plaything, and who's too emotionally retarded to not realize how dumb it would be to start a serious relationship with a married (and crazy) woman.

So, you know, your standard cuckold nonsense. Nothing new to report.

Not the story, the fans.

Everyone who doesn't like it is a "troll" or a hater. Hypocritical children.

The story is bad because the characters are stupid and unlikeable, not because of the subject matter.

Your cucki/wimp fans will applaud to that boring brainless crap!! But be aware monkeys will also applaud if you train them long enough!!

I owed this one a comment, but neglected to do so back when you first published it. Part two has prompted me to do just that.

You proved to me that you were a quality storyteller with the dark, twisted "Home Owner's Association". But this story is the one that elevated you in my eyes to that class of writers that really "do it" for me.

Loving Wives stories are a dime a dozen. Sadly, the vast majority these days are of the BtB variety, with any that dare have the wife enjoy sex with other men ending up downvoted to hell and filled with abusive comments from cowards who hide behind the Anonymous label. For those stories that do venture into such kinks, most are color by the numbers in layout; wife gets drunk, husband pushes a button, and suddenly, she fucks anything with a pulse. Everyone is simply horny, there are no other emotions, characters are flat, etc, etc. Yawn.

This tale isn't that way. To the contrary, this story feels believable. Couple explores in what should be a "safe" outlet, things get out of hand, couple discovers some dark things about themselves. You capture the emotional conflict of the husband really well, and I confess that you check all of my major boxes for this type of story - up to and including the pregnancy risk.

I really enjoyed the unique angles you used - the therapist, the "inferior" guy, and so forth. You did a great job of selling how a couple mired in the same old same old, hoping to have a baby, might explore and let things get out of hand. This was the rare story that really got my pulse racing, really caused me to put myself in the husband's shoes, really had me feeling the exhilaration, the arousal, the confusion, the doubt. Excellent job. I count this one among the best of the offerings by j267, newbie2008, steelring, and other outstanding authors.

There is nothing hotter than sharing your wife with another man. Even hotter when they develop deep feelings for one another. It happened to me when I shared my wife with a good friend. I've accepted their relationship and there is no going back or them ending it. I didn't realize he was very large going into this and with me being small he can do things I just can't.

You have such disrespect for human life, and people. No talent or artistry will ever be able to counter balance your lack of a soul.

You will flourish, among your own kind. Hope it is some consolation.

Inferidelity ????? DO you mean infidelity ????

What ?? is fetishizes??

Cuck shares white trying to get her pregnant, as author.makes up new words.

It's an old tale -- wife does what husband wants, realizes she likes it and wants to continue. I like it!

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Dangerous game... but really intense. Loved it!