by saturnaliat
Interesting story (thus far),really short chapters.So,it looks like it will be another one of those slowly posted stories.Well good thing I have plenty of time.
Good but needs refinement
To quick from one thing to the other and no real plot depth other than, this happens and oh yay another thing happens
JC
A great fun story but chapters are much to short, I just started to get into it and it stopped.