All Comments on 'Infidelity Ch. 01'

by bbtp41

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story

About time for a burn the husband story.Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"Your welcome,"????

That is the problem with this story. You probably don't even realize what's wrong. Find an editor. What about tenses?

bbtp41bbtp41over 7 years agoAuthor
Dear Anonymous

Are you offering your services as an editor, hmmm?

ju8streadingju8streadingover 7 years ago

which one was cheating first?

some where i missed that part

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
From the way you wrote the story

I don't like either one... And I don't care which one cheated first... they are both paper thin characters with multiple, flaws and not worth developing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
4* I Thought It Was Fun!

It was a fun story. Any man who has fucked an older, or substantially younger woman (I've done both) would identify with it and find it interesting.

This is a place of fiction stories, right? Relax and enjoy folks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice story.

Next time make the sex more descriptive...5* anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
wtf

why is there still a marriage???

oh wait she doesn't wont to work, she would rather prostitute herself for the paycheck

this is a bleak shit story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
So what is the plot? Is this just a revenge fuck story?

OK, she's getting her revenge. I'm cool with that. Thanks for sharing?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
To the point!

A loved it! Just what was needed...Nothing more...nothing less...In one chapter only ! Precise! Keep going on this path! A good and rare skill...to be precise!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Only idiotic!!! Minus 5*!!!

What a bunch of crap!!!

Impo_64Impo_64over 7 years ago
These two cheaters deserve each other...

These two cheaters deserve each other...Being married to each other means only one marriage ruined...1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Satisfaction!

God bless you Mrs. Hammond and keep you safe!

tendernsweet2tendernsweet2over 7 years ago
That ...

That good old boy is thinking she is doing with out <<<<< boy has he got a lot to learn.!** hehe It never pays to stray as you lose in the 'end'.! Young-un is getting more than the old man is.! LOL Never under estimate the mind of a woman.!~````

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Infedelity

Two wrongs don't make a right.

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago

An old whore cheating with friends young son. Put his balls in a jar and.put the whore.on the street asap.

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