by bbtp41
That is the problem with this story. You probably don't even realize what's wrong. Find an editor. What about tenses?
I don't like either one... And I don't care which one cheated first... they are both paper thin characters with multiple, flaws and not worth developing.
It was a fun story. Any man who has fucked an older, or substantially younger woman (I've done both) would identify with it and find it interesting.
This is a place of fiction stories, right? Relax and enjoy folks!
why is there still a marriage???
oh wait she doesn't wont to work, she would rather prostitute herself for the paycheck
this is a bleak shit story
OK, she's getting her revenge. I'm cool with that. Thanks for sharing?
A loved it! Just what was needed...Nothing more...nothing less...In one chapter only ! Precise! Keep going on this path! A good and rare skill...to be precise!
These two cheaters deserve each other...Being married to each other means only one marriage ruined...1*
That good old boy is thinking she is doing with out <<<<< boy has he got a lot to learn.!** hehe It never pays to stray as you lose in the 'end'.! Young-un is getting more than the old man is.! LOL Never under estimate the mind of a woman.!~````
An old whore cheating with friends young son. Put his balls in a jar and.put the whore.on the street asap.