All Comments on 'Ingrams & Assoc 4: Beneath the Surface Ch. 01'

What does this have to do with LW ?

Very good story.

Not erotic yet, but I'm sure that's coming. Loving wives? Megan must be married.

Fucking hack job. I think the gay category wound fit you better fucking nonce

That bad ol' jezzaz made them think. The pain must be excruciating for the poor dears. Since thinking is such an unwonted phenomena in their pitiful lives.

"Greeeaat. I thought it was going to be a relaxing time, on the run from mobsters who want to kill us. Instead, I'm going to have a hottie with a PhD running through my head every day. Terrriiifffiiiccc." I said, attempting to inject some jollity into the proceedings for a second time. .--------

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get his face fixed ---happy days lol ------ 5

Ok mystery so far, waiting for the complete story.

I like your stories...One is even in the list for best story 2015 in LW...Let's see where you are taking us...3* for now

The last thug to die was fucking a MILF in his spare time when he was just being a Bad Bull, instead of an Arch-Villain. Thus LW!

Other than that, I loved it ... but I like Ingrams and Jezzaz almost always! Blow yourself up by firing a pistol around methane gas in a sewer? GMAFB! How much better can it get? Oh, yeah, and Giraffe (Phantom of Opera) Man getting therapy from Hottie Therapist on Cliffside Washington Seashore Chalet while drinking hot coffee!!! Just put bacon in the coffee to make the story better! Only real grinch is that Psychiatry is a post-doc specialty area for MDs ... like Cardiology or Surgery ... NO Masters degree en-route! Not like Clinical or Counseling Psychology (although Masters gets you little in those, either!)

Oops. Confabulated the Shaky Side locale. SoCal vice Seattle!

(But Seattle area woulda been better hidey-hole starter! Then I wouldna be wrong!))

I wonder why so much angst about categories in this category. Don't understand this level of concern. For the author. A person can get a MS with a major in psychology. One can get a masters in psychology. One can get a PhD in psychology. I have one in neuropsychology. One cannot get a masters in Psychiatry. Psychiatry is a medical jargon word basically. To be a psychiatrist first get a undergrad degree. Then a medical degree. Get thru an internship. Then do your residency in psychiatry. Then do what needs to be done to be board certified. Rarely meet decent psychiatrists these days. Used to. Too many are so immersed in drug therapy they have no idea that things like EFT are more effective. Or that SAMe works for depression while anti depressants do not work and often make the depression worse leading to suicidal or homicidal ideation. Did you know that most, if not all, the mass killers were taking or had been taking an SSRI. Drug companies hide that don't they. Oh well just an unimportant point of info. A masters in psychiatry does not exit.

....picked this category, but it most likely will become so, soon.

I enjoyed it. This was an excellent opening to a much broader, farther reaching story....starting with, "The Man in the Sewer".... An obvious misfit, troubled, intelligent well beyond the requirements of his current situation, asocial, lonely.

And of course the Ingram's babes appear and get involved.....or rather involve him in some close call operation.

Simply, it has all the elements of great story-telling.

It is, as usual, well presented and is a pleasant read, a few odd turns of phrase, notwithstanding.

Carry on, J!

Thank you.

I agree on two counts. Corking story beginning and yes, bacon DOES make everything taste better :-)

Good opening but oder where it will go?

Great lead into the story, grabs the attention and won’t let go!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thomasn should recognise the situation he's in - standard "Man from UNCLE" plot with the pretty girl winding up involved with Solo or Kuryakin in all sorts of adventures...

I'm surprised I missed this tale in the Ingrams & Associates World but I did. Glad I found it. Excellent start. 5*