by AfroEroChubbiez
I love this story, thank you for continuing. Looking forward to the update.
I love this story!!! Lol, maybe I'm the only one, but I wants NO drama! I just want it to be Makena and Marcus, no one else!!! Update soon!
Hey guys, I will be posting the next chapter very soon. I don't have any excuses for my absence, I was just stuck and scared, (cowardly friggin me!) so I'm back!
looking forward to what happens with Makena and Marcus. really enjoying the story line and appreciate the, positive character that the couple possess. excellent job so far.
I'm going to take it out on you.
Just before Marcus and Kenzie parted ways at the mall, Marcus said something to Anna about the plans, and what he wanted her to do. Something he was expecting a positive response to, something Kenzie was expecting a positive response to, I was expecting a positive response to, and what happens?
"Anna shook her head." Shaking the head is a NEGATIVE response. One does NOT shake their head up & down. A person's head moving up and down, or nodding, is a positive response, shaking one's head is not. It's fundamental, it is so elemental, just thinking about someone rotating their head side to side is so obviously negating, I cannot understand how frequently I see someone write, 'They shook their head in agreement.'
Good, now that's off my chest. It HAD to be said.
Now, don't even GET me started on supine versus prone...
haha
Sure seems like there's a whole lot more 'story' for just one more chapter.
Thanks for sharing, and thanks for all the work.
(Could have used 'one more', though.)
Regards,
GeoD