All Comments on 'Inmate Mom Pt. 01'

by officerreagan

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happymuffinhappymuffinover 6 years ago
So my toughts are

I give 4 starts because I really really like the idea and I look forward to part two, but I would like to take a slower approach I mean I get why this was so quick but still a bit slower. Still great idea

grayge37grayge37over 6 years ago
Your comment "Here goes nothing" was exactly how I felt about your story.

There was nothing to the story that would hold me to wanting more.

Title indicated Pt. 01 - don't bother with 02 in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This was way too fast and way too short, I hope you understand the difference between the two.

You should strive to make each chapter at least 2-3 lit pages.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
go to

go to prison and you will find that mothers and sons are not allowed to be in the same areas for fear of things like this and no they do not allow family members on the sme block as guard and inmates it is against the law and the guard would lose his job before it happened dumb story

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