All Comments on 'Innocence Ch. 01'

really enjoyed the setting of the scene for future seductions :)

Great story....Looking forward to Chapter 2

creeped me out.

thank you for the compliments...sorry it creeped you out mschack63 ...anyway..working on part two..~giggles~

I loved the pace and the descriptive. I am really looking forward to the story continuing!

i just love how manipulative daddy is...cant wait for more

a great start - looking forward to the next chapter.

So good! When are you going to be finished with part 2?? Please hurry!

Omg sooo hot need more fast!

God that so hot. More please!!!

Your writing ability exceeds most contributors here, both generally and creatively. And I'm quite sure that it creeped one commentator out because the father figure/power holder is in reality the one most likely to abuse power, not the daughter which is how most people want to frame it. Good on you!

This has been one of my faveorite stories for a long time... gets me hot.

I'm adding my voice to the choir: please continue!!

Oh please do a Chap. 2 soon ! I loved the story and I got so excited !!

some idiot posted a second chapter to this story under the name "Aveela2" if you did not ok this contact the webmasters and have it deleted and the writer banned.

NO...I DID NOT OK YOU LATCHING ONTO MY STORY!

honestly I found it very RUDE that you or anyone would do that and USE A FORM OF MY NAME...that alone should have you banned.

part 2 in the works...and ty all for your comments. ..

At least, I got you working on another part. Good thing you're working on yours now; would've been a terrible waste otherwise.

Cheers.

An update ? Can't wait to read what's comming next ! Such a good little girl to her daddy...

You can't get me hooked on this story and never post part 2! Please!

Love this story . Its well written. Can't wait for the next part!

When will the sequel come out?