All Comments on 'Innocence Ch. 05'

why there are no comments, not even the usual crowd that shit talks all Loving Wives stories? I guess since there was no intercourse, no fellatio etc they can't see the eroticism in the story. I know you stopped writing or did you? Are you using a different name? Are you writing for money? Thanks anyway.

This story had the potential to be very erotic and fun, but you took it to this weird place with e race cars and it just became boring. I suggest you get back to where it should be, he showing of "innocently" to the yard boys and others.

You have all of these guys staring looking. She's flashing but you say nothing about what she is wearing under her dresses. My suggestion is nothing once you find that out. That is at this point in the story

:)

This is an EXCELLENT Loving Wife story.

It's both EROTIC and totally TRUE TO LIFE.