All Comments on 'Innocence Has Its Secrets'

So far I personally think you can go places with this - cant wait to see what your going to do with it and able to read it!!!!

Forget the bad idea or use of just putting a number (i.e. 3) between a couple blank lines as a chapter indicator. Either omit these or use the word chapter followed by the number. Otherwise readers are confused as to just a sub area or new chapter.

I'm sooo excited, this is my very FIRST story!!! I will for sure continue...

Writen by a wanker

First-Ever Story?

Good for you!

A promising beginning.