All Comments on 'Innocence Lost Ch. 01'

well done! Not really my category...but have to say it's a great set-up piece. You need to plan on more...yes, yes -- very nice indeed!

It's a good start. It seems there will be no mercy.

This has potential although I hope mistress starts using clever methods instead of brute punching

Not many in the lifestyle like others to damage their property. Marks are to come from those that dominate and own.

I would not harm my property to the point of bloodying her.

The brute force unneeded when there are so many other methods. I hope it changes in chapters to come. A pretty pet to tame needs not to have her body broke, but her spirit and that, only slightly, or she becomes of no use other then a stepford sub.