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tdelain69about 19 years agoHot but
The content of your stories is hot, but you really need someone to proof your writing before you release it to be read.
Anonymousover 6 years agoInteresting
Not a bad story line, but your writing is TERRIBLE! You sound totaly illiterate! Aside from your spelling and grammar, you jump from first person to third person in the same sentence.
How is someone so uneducated in this day and age?
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