All Comments on 'Innocent Dinner'

Your two stories both belong in Loving Wives. I sense your fear in attracting all the negative comments about cheating and cuckoldry. My advice: dive right in. LW gets wide readership.

This does belong in LW. The only thing I ask is; if the story turns out where the hubby gets off on her having a lover and it turns into a WILLING cuckold story, please note that in the beginning by way oft a prologue. That should avoid many bad comments.

Cheating is so erotic and sexy isn't it? Maybe for braindead sicko's.

Erotic story, but sad....what about the husband, oh wait she said, "That's not your problem. It's mine." Guess she doesn't care!

...just a different venue. Not a story really but a scene from a life. You know how to set a mood but in two years no added complexity to your offering? Uh oh, I hear Scotch on the rocks coming to whisper sweet accolades. I'd best be off now. Wouldn't want to be called ignorant for lack of sycophancy.

Another I hate my husband story. She is as far away from a loving wife as you can get. Sorry but it wasn't very exciting

What a wonderful description of a sorry excuse for a woman. How about a second chapter where you describe how her husband throws her out on her ass? The story really lacks some real life consequences.

The last line of the story was cut off. That is the one where the husband pops up and says, "Definitely go again. As a matter of fact, go for the rest of your life!"

Another story with no redeeming qualities other than providing a good definition of a wife nobody wants to have.