All Comments on 'Innocent Friends'

Welcome to Lit.

Your style is breezy & refreshing, with a sense of 'breathless honesty' that is compelling :)

I hope we'll see more submissions, & in the near future!

You really need to work on your grammar and punctuation. It's very hard to read a story when it's very choppy. Your description on the sex was ok, but it seemed rushed. Slow down and tell us more about the sex.

Excellent piece of work. Can't wait for the 2nd installment. Don't keep us waiting too long. Thanks

Please continue this great story.

this was fantastic. i cant wait for part two, my pussy is soaked as is my girlfriends. Nice work .

The sex is hot and exciting and well described, but the characters are too one-dimensional and shallow. Please expand on the lives and times of Chrissy and Katherine.

So horny