All Comments on 'Innocent Ilsa: Portfolio Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Atta Boy Lucas

To say that I love this series is a huge understatement. Yes yes yes! You got your mind right on this one for sure. Glad you gave up removing parking meter heads and started writing. Now lets get at them beans .... err next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This story is tragically underrated. This is exactly what NC should be. 1 complaint is it feels rather rushed in chapter 2 and moves away from NC into MC. I hope you do more like this one some day.

chrissy2chrissy2over 4 years ago
sexy

very good sensual build up

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