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You have a gift of sharing the experiences between two men. Yes, it's porn and all is ideal, I get that. But, you write with a connection between the characters and keep the voices consistent. There are a few punctuation items to address, but it didn't distract me. I value anyone taking the effort to create. Bringing life to words is a gift and you have it. Thanks for the effort and for creating respite in your writing. Sincerely, Richard