by MisterZ
... no, it IS a parody of the classic Victorian defloration scene, and a very good one indeed. Five stars
I it could have been good, but mostly it was just grotesque. I hate the mistress. Yes, he's a debauched man, but it's not realistic at all for the girl to react as she did. Too much too fast. If he had done it gradually, it could have been good.
Great story, love to hear more of how Lily educates her