All Comments on 'Instructing the Bride'

by MisterZ

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 10 years ago
Almost a parody

... no, it IS a parody of the classic Victorian defloration scene, and a very good one indeed. Five stars

Ellienora35Ellienora35about 10 years ago
I didn't like it.

I it could have been good, but mostly it was just grotesque. I hate the mistress. Yes, he's a debauched man, but it's not realistic at all for the girl to react as she did. Too much too fast. If he had done it gradually, it could have been good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
glad

Glad you did not add to this story. Terrible.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Fabulous, loved it

Great story, love to hear more of how Lily educates her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
And nothing

Where is the 2nd night?

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous